Monday, December 15, 2014

post # 2 The Beginning

post # 2
The Beginning



“This is so stupid!”
“You’re stupid, Layla.”
The very quick, and notoriously aggressive Layla shot back some thorough comments on Alberto’s physical appearance. Meanwhile, Mickey was cracking up behind a sofa chair.
“Damn Layla, why you got to be so rude? Alberto’s all about to cry now, look at him sniffling over there,” said Lucas.
“Yeah, really Layla, Chill,” Trayvon calmly added.
“I ain’t crying!” Alberto shot back defensively. Once again, Mickey was pounding his fist on the chair, clearly this was very funny to him. Mickey literally laughed at everything, even at things that really shouldnt ever be funny at all.
“Yeah you are, bro,” Lucas jokingly retorted. Mickey laughed with him.


Trayvon, Mickey, Soo-Lang, Chichi, and Chichi’s brother Santiago were all lounging in the living room, enjoying the comical back-and-forth. Chichi took a sip of her juice and then looked at her brother,
“Do you want to go home? It’s getting kind of late you know.”
“Nah, I’m okay. I’m just a little hungry, can we eat something please?” Santiago went by Santi and he was about to turn thirteen in a couple of days, so Chichi had decided to dedicate a week to him, by bringing him everywhere she went.
“Yeah sure - Hey, hey! Hey!” It took a minute to grab the room’s attention, “Are you guys hungry? Santi wants to eat.”
“Hell yeah we’re hungry!” cried Alberto. Layla gave him a stank look before rolling her eyes. Mickey laughed.
“Okay then let’s go,” said Lucas. Everyone slowly sprung up the way nature programs fast-forward the blooming of flowers - slowly, but eventually. They casually stretched, and then united in front of the door.


“Actually guys, it’s seven. I have to go home,” said Trayvon, “Bye!” The others waved Trayvon off. And then there were seven........


Q#1: How many characters are there, and what do you know about them so far?
Q#2: What happens next?
Q#3: Any more questions?

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